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We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
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Started good but it is getting worse, this novel must be about going into various dreams and doing things in them but its focus is about being on normal op stupid mc in a modern world
The audacity of Webnovel to copy-paste the original translation here, not only do they copy-paste off the original source which has more than 90+ chapters compared to this stupid trial read bound of 40 chapters, they lock and expect us to buy chapters 20+ when it's free in the site :D.
if anyone can find which novel the first 75 chapters belong to.. I would really be grateful. thanks.........................................
overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)
Sounds like another Low IQ MC. I like these type of CNs, whether it's making the halo protagonist your disciple or killing him, I've seen Authors have some pretty darn good ideas but in the end it's not implement well. Just female leads love him for no good reason at all and suffocate the MC who knows nothing and gets annoying as a reader.Idk it may be to soon for me to judge.
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As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead.As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity.As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!
This is just a copy pasted novel. That too is a disgusting read, only read if you like beta mc he's such a loser despite him being a traverser god knows what his age is and even after having a system he's such a sissy that blushes whenever a girl talking to him in a forceful manner. As I said this is just a copy pasted novel the author didn't even try to correct the grammar mistakes made after MTL you'll frequently mistake genders of characters. Webnovel should ban such people but that's how their business works so can't expect much from them.
