Relic

Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.

The story is just so good.It just keeps you wanting for more.But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.

Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated

Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into.Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about.Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this.Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more.Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.Sincerely,                     The one and only Doraemon~

overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)

Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.