Totally love this novel. I want more of this. Nathan's personality is soooo cute[img=update]. I hope the author writes lots of chapters cause I don't want this story to end too soon.
A xianxia version of a companion/escort mission with the most annoying character to make it worse.
This book is very good and interesting, the language style is very cool and easy to understand.This work really impressed me and made me even more excited to read it.
Not worth readingThe mc is actually useless. He progressed so fast in the first couple of days, Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even!
Gave this the best rating because my lil thing actually grew into 2 inches im pavlin heat now?
One word: AMAZING.The imagery was so compeling. The way you wrote your prologue makes a reader want to carry on reading. It is truly captivating. I love that this is a dark isekai because most of the Insekai I come across are light so this was quite interesting to read. Of course, I only read a few of the chapters since there's is so many. I also love Ren's character. He is a NEET who has to now live the oppostie way of how he lived beforesince he is out in the open with many life threatening encounters. I loved that he had to work hard to become stronger and that it was not easy. That made the story more realistic and not rushed. Overall, great job.P.S. I've added this story to my library.
The story starts off pretty well, doing a good job of introducing the plot and some characters (that at least feel real and have some depth) as well as relevant information about the world. I noticed a few errors in writing, be it tense or singular / plural mistakes, this could be an issue with translation(?)
Keep up the good work bes! Suportado ka namin kami bahala sayo! ****************************************************************************
Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off. Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off.
The book is great. So far I’m on chapter 84 and right now things are looking good, I won’t give any spoilers but really glad he’s not banging girls left to right, gives the characters and story more time to develop. Author-San added so much background even to side characters (gotta love that). He’s not overly powered but strong enough to beat people at his age which is great, he’s actually smart and not some wussy, dumb and irrelevant MC. I definitely give this a 10/10 you should check it out.
The author pat his own back on this one. ?
So far I have only read it to chapter 57 and I am not impress. I have a lot of patience with grammatical error and mispelling because I know that this is translated on a language that is not local to the author but my man, if you are shooting to make money on a language that is not familiar to you at least use a google to check your grammar. The errors are so blatant that it will drive you nuts! One more thing, I thought asian are good at math? WHY does the calculations on your novel so out of whack?! If you dont know how to add just make it vauge amount like aprroximately, or almost or better yet just dont add anymore.
You got the nerve to grade your own work 5 star? Seriously?
Fix your errors then I will definitely agree with you. Your stories carry a great potential to become something great but you need to have consistency with your grammars, character persona, and dont do math if you’re not good at it.
MC meets extremely arrogant characters-> extremely arrogant characters challenge MC -> mc sandbags -> mc gets humiliated -> mc comes back and monologue mentions it was part of his plan because of his big brain -> mc faceslaps -> repeatthat's the whole novel, do not read under any circumstance.