Awesome ???? keep it up One day you become one of the best writer auther ??????????????????✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️????????????????????????????☕???
There some relative good qualities (compared to the low norm that we are used to), but the rhythm of the story is all over the place. Tiresome.
Love this Novel one of the best fantas system novels out there. The female protagonist is believable and the world development one the story gets longer will be amazing I’m sure.
morgan is the cover ,gotta give it a 5* as that is her rating in fgo . i haven't really read it but imma give it 5* just because its morgan ,a waifu of mine .
the story is interesting I encourage the writer to keep writing. charlotte is a wicked lady imagine being under a man's roof for 8years only for the man to find out that the child he called his wasn't his, jayden is a good man , I love the way he handled everything..more grace to the writers elbow
Interesting story. Keep up the good work. Very action packed, fast-paced and engaging to read. Best of luck to the author and the future of this book.
This is review after 167 chapters...I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.?(Of course, there are many other authors who have written countless times better than I did)However, This story also has MANY flaws such as some grammatical mistakes and some inconsistency in story. If you read the story, you are welcome to criticize it and I'll try to correct and improve based on your suggestions if I find them good. ***However, there are some things which you won't like but it doesn't mean that it's sh** so don't try to judge it and read if you like if not no one gonna force you to read.Happy reading~
I'm just in chapter eight and I'm already intrigued Is it weird that I'm inlove with both Zayden and Xander?❤️Ughh these guys are just so cute and funny?❤️
funny, pleasant, has enough chapters in the raw that the author probably won't drop it out of nowhere, filler text to meet the word count requirement
As further chapters are locked,can anyone *recommend me any site to read it for free*.It is really a good novel if you are bored with other.
The mechanics of the game and the mage class are fun to learn about and are very interesting, The plots seems very slow paced but when you continue to read the next thing you know your on ch 39. Overall the bonds the McCain have with his friends are great, the interactions with the Npc dont feel akward but more realistic. If I could give this a 100 I would.
Now that I have caught up with the story and have been following it religiously since, I got something else to say:This is the only webnovel I deem worthy of support from the entire lot(I hope to find more, but the amount of garbage makes it nigh impossible). Even compared to actuall fantasy books that take years to write(from writers like Joe Abercrombie, Brandon Sanderson, R.A. Salvatore... you get the point) this is almost on the same playing field. However, you cant compare a novella written on a daily basis without much review with the biggest fantasy writers of the 21st century. It would be unfair and stupid, and yet this work is relentlessly grasping at the feet of such giants and the quality reflects that.As I keep reading, the story only keeps getting better, the characters more interesting, and the worldbuilding more believable. Even with all the pop-culture and meta refferences, this work keeps surprising. It easily brings you from ceasless bellowing laughter, to a serious atmosphere and it even throws freshly cut onions at your face(definitely not crying, ots the onion). Can't give the writer enough praise, and while marginally subjective, my opinion allows me to rate this webnovel 11/10.**: This is my second review and I don't care if its illegal to post more than one.