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No topo de um prédio uma garota desistia de tudo... Seu nome era Eloah, ela pulava daquele prédio para se suicidar... "Deu certo?" tudo ficou escuro, ela não conseguia mexer seu corpo, mas de repente uma luz tão linda aparece em sua frente e seu corpo ganha forças misteriosamente, ela fica tão hipnotizada pela luz que apenas vai em sua direção sem pensar em nada e quando chega... Fica tudo escuro mais uma vez, "então eu realmente morri?" Mas de repente uma risada e ouvida, passos se aproximam, será que Eloah realmente morreu?

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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: You said "Break of 3-4 Days" but it has been 3 months, I would suggest if/when you come back to this you set it up to update automatically so that such an issue does not likely happen again.Positive Feedback:  Well written well executed story. Good flow, and I don't notice many if any mistakes.;,;.Personal Feedback: I'm honestly not really a fan of novels in which the MC makes their own Harem, and really, I tend to stay away from Harem in general for the most part (w/ exceptions being like "Isekai wa smartphone no tomo ni" AKA "In Another World with my Smartphone" where the Harem was forced upon the MC), therefore I will not be continuing this novel.;,;.
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Boring Trash cringe after the girl came......??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Isn't this the Japanese LN with the same name? If you didn't get legal permission from the publisher to post this here, I suggest you remove this ASAP. Remove it before anyone reports you.
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this isn't wish fulfillment ......no this is god tier DREAM fulfillmentidkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts
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It’s a fairly decent novel overall. While the concept is pretty good, it’s also very standard and nothing truly amazing happens in the novel. The writing quality is readable but with plenty of mistakes each chapter. The biggest problem with the story is it just feels lazy, there’s many strange decisions, errors and problems that are in this novel that probably shouldn’t be, in addition the author doesn’t really seem to care about any of that. It’s good for a free novel, but it would not be worth paying for compared to almost any other cultivation novel
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I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.
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