Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
Husshh!!! The vocabulary is so awsm, yet simple. I loved the synopsis at the first moment. it's a great one. The plot is also good, bringing something new out of it and doing justice. Keep it up author.
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This was an interesting read.Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read.Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors.I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out.Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc.Overall, good work there.Good luck.
i really like these kinds of novelseven though the english isnt always that good, its still enjoyableif someone knows similar novels please let me know! I want more novels like this!
This book is a MUST READ for everyone. Let's take a close look:
1. After reading even three chapters you gets FULL understanding of the world, leveling up and how the magic works in this world. You don't have any questions as everything is clear and everything is left is to read further.
2. The world itself is very clear, so it means author made detailed image of it in his or hers head and understand what to wrote about.
3. The main hero is a genius, but he's not over-gifted and everything is balanced.
I like how you do write and describe things, but I noticed some mistakes, and I advice you to install any app that corrects grammar and here you go!
This story has a great potential so I added it to my list and will read further!
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Writing quality 2 stars its not that bad but not that good cant continue reading this until the writing quality improve and previous chapters get edited.
Like the story but I regret giving so many golden tickets and votes only to see this has been all but dropped by the author..................
I am very curious about the existence of Jena.where is he? every paragraph of your novel story makes me curious to re-read further information. plot twist is cool. every sentence you write makes readers think hard to find answers to unanswered questions from readers. Really cool novel in my opinion. strong imagination. cheers bro
The way MC talks to his sister gives me the creeps. He's always calling her cupcake and sunshine while smiling at her creepily. He's a transmigrated person yet his obsession with his sister is very unnatural. It's obvious he wants to date his sister but ultimately ends up dating someone else first believing his sister is already 'in the bag'. There was not much of a story to this novel but with the addition of harem the remaining story was destroyed as well.
This is a classic: handsome MC married in a woman family after he helped her, so she ignored him.Honestly I would like if the protagonist would ignore the cold ice wife and try to hook with the maid, she is interested and the wife literally dropped in a farm for 6 months.