AiliseuTKA
An award winning writer....................
There's 3 factors here that made the review 3.4. Firstly the story development, followed by the character design and world background. The introduction for the opening chapter was not that great of a start. I was expecting something to happen as he got into the woods but the author made it look very ordinary. Atleast put some stray animals there or something that could intrigue your readers. In concludsion, it was very normal, just a kid with superhuman strength. Some dialogue flows unnaturally. Most scenes was rushed. The cuts per chapter needs a lot of improvement. Character design, there was nothing unique, plain and simple. World background... this is the most lacking.
The story can be waited out for about 20-30 more chapters before the final verdict.
i though Sebastian and Lemuel were my fave couple but Gabriella and Jartre are quickly catching up to them
Love this book so much. Thank you.
I love it so addictive I can't stop reading ... ohhhhhhhhh
The crap people write is just unsettling. Then there are poeple who like that crap…
Excellent story. Sad to see it end
so far so good. I only wish updates were more frequent than currently done.
alright read
Very intresting start. Already wondering what will happen to the main leads. It's always like this in real life too I guess. People have heart to love but it's Destiny that determines if they get their love or not... Very interested to see who is destined to whom...
So much emotion while reading this book, I absolutely love it... this is my favorite book for this year. This book moved me so much I cried alot but it's worth it. Thank you Author...️you are an amazing writer
One of my top favorites now!!
