Is this novel worth reading??
Lefi is preganant... and Yuki is also boning Lyuu...
I've seen another novel with female protagonist that has similar plot of the story, some scenes are recreated, but its still a good story tho, you should try it (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
I couldn’t read beyond chapter 9. The FL is stressful. Letting a man walk all over her and trample her. Do such women exist? That they really throw away their dignity and life all for one man? I hope i never get to meet one or i’ll smack them in the head.
Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel .
The book is good. I’m captivated within the first few chapters.
the rating is after 60 chapters. The story had a bit potential, but writing quality is very bad. In the 60 chapters, nothing really happens, and whole chapters with lots of words are wasted in describing tiny details. A very bad writing quality.
Pretty good so far keep it up ! I'm liking the Dean character more and more.
Don't laugh at me, readers! I am giving myself a full five-star review.
Why? Because no one gives a review to this cultural book!
What a great story I can literally feel the sweat and tears coming off the screen. I can tell you out a lot of work init this and I suggest you don't slow down I'm sure soon you'll be at the top of web novel
Good story, the plot is interesting and the characters are well developed. Still, I want to give you a few tips from a fellow author that can imho improve your writing... Try to drop the "he said," and "she said" in every dialogue line it's kind of distracting. Another thing is you should focus less on every mundane thing that Max does - remember you are writing a novel, not a journal. So focus primarily on things important for the plotline. But overall I think it has potential so keep writing!
I lovee how the story is developing, keep up the good work.
The character Khael sure is a mystery on it's own and Elvery has to work on her detective skills.