Hello everybody. Here, the author. I would like for everybody to read my new book. Critics, as long as constructive, are always appreciated.
Hello, this is my first work and I'd like your support. If it got problems please let me know.
Will Jeremy be alone forever, without company? I know he will have no companions, but at least servants?Brasil??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??
This story is great good grammar and the author uploads frequently the only thing that sucks is that I have to pay to read more I’ m broke so sucks to be me
Extremely interesting characters, abilities, and story! Very different from any other "magic" I've seen in a story before. I'm interested in seeing where the story goes. Definitely will be sharing this one with some friends
Yet another story of an abusive ML. Plus this one drags soooo much. You are in for 10k chapters. The first 60+ chapters are just 2 days in the life of the MC
the story is very good for me, cant understand why there are some people with awful review.. but yeah every people had different taste on story though..Btw buat aku belajar inggris dikit-dikit ambil kosa katanya :v thank you kak XD kudukung mumpung coin gratis XD
I just accidentally found oug about this book so i havent read it past 20 chapters buT since the Beginning you coUld tell that The book is very interesting and im looking forward tO more development
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The book tells about the reality of life........ The struggle of people living in abject poverty.......... I commend the main character's struggle for freedom from such a depressing life......... Honestly I'm really liking this book. Good job author
Overall the story is a cute idea following this highschooler through the akwardness and tribulations of being a teenager. There are several places in the story where things could be fleshed out better however, especially the characters. The only relationship we see fleshed out here is between Dashuan and Ray, and even there we still get too much uneccesary fluff that tells us very little about the characters. Jesicca also starts as a manic pixie dream girl, and isn't given much character development. We still see her as this unrealistic idea of what a teenage girl is like.And don't be afraid to give your characters each authentic voices! I often found you using the same slang with each character, including Jessica (even though she's foreign). Lots of potential here! Please proofread your work and make your characters shine! We don't need to know all the specifics of bball!
Liked. ..........