The Moon Bride

Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important.The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it.Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers.I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid?Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !!And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking.Dropped. Don't waste your time.2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.

I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1-horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day.-adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s)The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reactionDevil fruits-forbidden fruitBlackbeard- forgot his alternate nameMonkey d dragon- something d somethingHaki-forgot something about soul attacksShadow monarch-dark sovereignDjinn from magi-djinn from magiNen hxh- NenOverlordBlack clover books-black clover booksEtc these are just the ones on top of my head

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A really good book.Mc here is clever and knows what to do. The story doesn't feel forced or anything.I would recommend this novel.         

I Dropped the Novel Around 120 chapters in The MTL, I don't like how Mc doesn't kill his enemies and spares them and thn they come with a Bigger Powerhouse to Take revenge, This always happens, Mc kills when he is really forced to, He always make up some stupid things to Spare his enemies, Even knowing that the guy is an Opposite Faction's Force and They will Attack Mc's Sect in the near future 100% yet He doesn't weaken them By Killing him, its really Frustrated me, And the Things about The Novel is His Disciples Always Shows Disbelief in their faces whenever Mc introduce new Things To The Sect and Doesn't Believe him but Later after knowing The features about the Thing they always Shows admiration, Its good one time or two time but seeing this happen again and again makes it very annoying, Mc's all Disciples Before joining His sect always shows Disdain or Ridicules Mc but after Mc showing some Cool/Good Stuff of the Sect they are in the Awe of the Mc/Sect, Its also Very Repetitive.