I remember reading this story somewhere else (probably fanfiction . com).Is it your own work and you are relocating it here or is it someone else's?If it is someone else's, I hope you have their permission to post it here.
It's actualy kinda good novel but MC is total not gonna kill anyone beta I hope his enemies will come back and viciously slaughter his friends and family why he screams I'm beta and won't kill anyone
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I have read this till chapter 24 and have quite liked the way this story is developing and can see it's potential. Character till now is neither all powerfull nor has a cheat system till now atleast. Although I understand this is still early however I hope atleast few of the below thing could be made somewhat more clear1. World background - we only know that his kingdom is at war with an alliance. Since the mc is still young he might not need to know but still a background would give more context and what mc is acutally being prepared for.2. side character - apart from their you still get to know quite less abt their personality or background3. Martial system - still not clear with the levels and type
Im giving it a five star because every cahpter is entertaining for me and the story is not on the cliche side of startBut im very confuse in their emotional stateAuthor tend to contradict of what their saying and thingking to what theyre doing(you know the the i hate you but love you at the same time and the most important person in my life but not as a family and the most powerfull person then there is another that also the most powerful man in the world)I might chage the rating in the future though
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I have read the info and it's amazing. I honestly think this content that will put in this story is unique since I haven't seen this kind of setting.
Any one who likes reincarnation to a game world novel then this is a great pick. I wanted to stop reading this around chapter 25 and then again at 36 as I just couldn't keep focus, dreading the wall of text that would give me information/answers to questions that were never asked, only to find our that if they didn't do this you would of been super confused, but by chapter 52 you start seeing things fall into place and starting to make a lot more sense.. then bam you at the end of whats been translated feeling like "FAAARRRRRRKKK I WAS FINALLY ENJOYING THAT" The side character development is pretty bad, but this can be seen as the author trying to make people follow the mind set of the MC, he just doesn't have time to worry about side characters at this point in the novel, so i don't see this as bad point,k if it stays like this though at later chapters then its gonna be an issue. I am giving this 5 on everything because i can see potential in the novel and want to see further updates, if or when this novel start releasing more chapters I will re visit this review to update.