Hi there, fellow daoists. Author here!This is my first story and i intend for it to be my best, so do not be easy on your reviews but do show some love once in a while.T.TIn any case, i've been hesitating on writing xuanhuans for two years now, and recently finally gained the courage to start. I shamelessly ask that you encourage meself by commenting on the chapters and giving heart felt reviews of the story, or support however you can and want. All is appreciated, Thank you very much for going on this journey with me.:PCordially, Author
This is a novel of good quality can't wait to see the end
a little too tragic, but I guess more to come as more chapters release, keep up the good work author, already added to my collection. i would love to see a pictorial representation of the night crawlers tbh.
When I read futa on male my mind explode and now was in shambles
update or be a gay......................
Honestly you should give this a try so far it’s very intriguing You will be hooked after reading the first few chaptersInnocent is actually one of the few good authors on this app, and whenever you see “anti hero” or “villian” in his book tags just know he’s gonna definitely deliver..And it has yandere in the title.. soooo that makes it even better ?
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Any Updates? Is The Author Sill Alive?..
So far good. But the fl gave me this in a rush vibe and doesn’t think things through. Like the first 3 chapters she already got punch in the face by her ex boyfriend/mate ?u200d?and ml I’m confused about him for now. Might be because there only four chapters for now ?but still encourage to read. Makes you want to know how it would develop ?
Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13).1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story.[5 Stars Here]2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that.[5 Stars Here]3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them.[5 Stars Here]4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book.[5 Stars Here]5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important.[4 Stars Here]Overall:4.8Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.
I rarely read mafia stories, but this book got me hooked from the start. Let's see how the development story.
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