Its not the author bruh. Its the translator. The Chinese have a different language in case you didn’t know, so it’s hard to translate that perfectly into English.
The ending is abrupt. I think she haven't reached till 70 level to unlocked the mystery of her transmigration. There is no conclusion. Sudden ending is disappointing.
Oh man Wang Yuetong is really pitiful, too pitiful. I kinda want to know now how this harem sh*t will work, although I still wished for the MC to continue to not be shaken by beauties, unfortunately, harem tag is powerful, maybe his heart will be really shaken in the future. Sad life, I just hope that there's not too many beauties at his side in the end.
Her grandparents r so annoying to heck with filial piety that’s bs
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The story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.
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The writing is absolutely great! I was pulled in with every paragraph! I normally don’t like most reincarination plotlines but from very the very first chapter I was interested. I recommend readers check this story out you won’t be disappointed.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
The series has three main characters. These three characters are friends. I wouldn't recommend it for those who don't like more than one mc(the harem tag for all mc not just for one mc). Others can read.
I had enjoyed this until the 8 yr old had to carry a useless but pretty Scarlet Johansson because she acts worse than a 8 yr old and is creepy in her behavior towards a kid. And i swear the author cant talk about a female without stating how pretty she is every two seconds. Considering he is a 8 yr old this seems to be over done and just turns creepy. Somehow authors can even turn a story about a young kid be surrounded by beautiful woman. Bet if he was old enough this would be harem. And how creepy the author is it may still turn out to be harem