the moment i saw the title i started crying im not joking it was my dream to read something like this
A swift romance novel here. The characters are fleshed out properly and the story has a great sense of hooking there. I love it. It is a great piece of art.
THE BEST VILLAIN NOVEL SO FAR. INTELLIGENT, CARNIVOROUS WHO LOVES FEMALE FLESH, MAGICAL WORLD WITH EVERYTHING I COULD WANT, AND BEST OF ALL. THE MC IS AN ENGINEER WHO ACTUALLY BUILDS THINGS.
This story is too slow and flat. For many web novels, the first 15-30 chapters are crucial for keeping readers interested enough to continue. That's why it's important to make readers care about your story. But in this case, I don't feel anything at all. Just empty. By the 30th chapter, only the background has been introduced; the MC has been reincarnated as an ordinary villager who sells herbs. The MC wants to be like a protagonist; to be strong but fails. He tries to use his future knowledge but fails as well. At first, I thought the author was aiming for a realistic approach to the isekai genre. But then suddenly, a system is introduced that helps the MC make soap. OMG. I think the author is underestimating the medieval setting. Soap has been known since ancient times, made from ashes and fats, so it's not a new discovery. Yet the author treats it as such, and everyone is surprisingly impressed. The MC then attempts to become rich. After the segment on marketing soap, the story suddenly shifts to a tragedy involving the death of an old man who took care of the MC. Here, the author doesn't even mention the name of this old man character.
I asked the author and he said the novel was totally cool and good.Surely he won't lie about that.Just to make sure I checked myself, and yeah, he didn't lie.
Ladies and gentlemen, brace yourselves—because this is peak fiction! No, seriously, you're about to dive into the best isekai story you will ever read—100% guaranteed. Everything is turned up to 11: unforgettable characters, heart-pounding drama, relentless challenges, and mind-blowing world-building. This isn’t just a story; it’s an adventure that shatters all expectations. Get ready for something extraordinary! P.S. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here!
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me being one character of it I like ethe story very much
good read. scenes are good. i like cheska, crazy cheska
SHAMELESSLY REVIEWING OWN WORK HEHE PLEASE COMMENT
Loved it ❤️ keep updating.
The pacing of the story has been written well and it's not lacking intensity with every chapter either with the fighting or twist in the plot of the story. It's a good book with an interesting concept that differentiates it from the rest of its kind of genre. Keep working on this book, author.