Rich Sex[Completed]

What should I say? I rarely leave an comment in Qidian but my eyes bled like hell. Writing-Quality is so-so, which is acceptable for new authors, but the MC is dumb af and propably a laughing stock in his past live. Even in the beginning chapters he tried to help people, who actually want to kill him - the dumb**** even knew it. He knew people have malice against him but he still behaves like a wannabe brain. Some events doesnt even make sense, like there is a rational and smart way to solve problematic events but the MC instead goes backwards in order to solve it. There's also alot of unnecessary text blocks which are redundant and only makes the story hard to read. Dont get me wrong, the story has a lot of potential  but there are just to many holes without any sense (like how the mc died in the first chapter on open streets but no one reacted and cared, as if the whole area had no people and vehicles). I guess it was my bad to have high hopes for new authors or im used to good written famous novels.

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The writing might or might not be good but the translation is pure garbage. I stopped in Chapter 4 and by that time a certain cultivation technique had 4+ different names. The writing/translation also ****ed up the world building right at the start of the novel.

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Great start author!Highly recommended this book, the story flows well and the descriptions are innovative and creative.Characters are likeable and humorous.Keep up the hard work author!