Writing quality is bad, very simple sentences with a good amount of mistakes. I am unable to even care about the story as every sentence is hurting my brain while trying to correct it.
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i can only say that the system was good.... and thats it. the mc is a racist over-nationalistic chinese man, everyone who are not chinese are the enemies of china. everything chinese is superior to everything that is not chinese. this novel just highlights the fact that the author is biased and racist. also the mc is p*ssy and hypocryte in a not so funny way. poor sense of humor and too much face-slapping. also, for some unknown reason, i kinda look down on the chinese now that i read this novel.final thoughts: i only read this because of the system, everything else is urban low-fantasy garbage.
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