DarkKnightSpider
The character design can improve. It's a bit too straight forward. I want to experience the character getting all strong and I want to know how said character has a particular skillset, how did he/she accomplish it. But I really enjoy this one. Not many novels have piqued my interest, whereas this one has.
If anyone's curious, this is the only webnovel in this batch of releases that's worth reading. The game one has an MC that's too annoying and the Ring story's protagonist is unbearably stupid. None of the rest are even worth mentioning.
The shameless author here I think I did a very good job.
Ok, thought this would be decent, but nope. Nothing. Cold garbage. There arent enough details, i dont get a picture of anything, and MC knows information we weren’t even told about at all. Sure, someone explains something vaguely to the MC, but we know absolutely nothing about what was explained. You would think that we ahould know something right?
it's amazing so looking forward to more, this story entered my top 10 for sure!!!I highly recommend it to the guys!!!Looking forward to more, I sure hope it becomes a webtoon in the future.
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I'm not a big fan of slowburn romance and I always find it weird when the MC just go back in time and is like OMG I regret everything I've done. And it seems like the one who betrayed who actually loves him for real ?!?!
I really like the book my man, keep up the good work
This story is really good and really like it's world building. The character developments are well written. I really love this one. Author thanks for the story and need more chapters.
I dunno if I can keep reading this story. Tried few chapters, and gave up. I want to keep my sanity, don't want to have an internal injuries ??? by reading it. The only 4 star I gave was for the translator, thanks so much for your hard work. I also appreciate the author for his/her works. ..But the story, seriously it's like reading a junior school‘s work ?? there's no depth in it, all I read was a crazy fans shouting and screaming for her idol, and the idol happen to be the oh soo talented, mighty, handsome, cool, op (what else??) Crown prince, aka the ML. It's a typical Cinderella story if I may say..And to be honest I am getting bored of it. I want another story like "it's not easy to be man after crossing/travel to the future” ....Or “zombie sister stratrgy”...“My master disconnected yet again (this one is refreshing, can't stop laughing). I would love to read something different. ????
I absolutely love this story. Quite shocked it's not higher on the voting scale. But the members of the men of culture group reign supreme along with some other nonsense stories that I can't get into. But back to the story. From the start the story behind very slightly cliche and then goes off into this massively different tale from what I was expecting. I didn't even realize I had been reading for so long as I was quickly immersed in the story losing out on some much needed sleep. But that's just how good and unique it is. The characters actually have depth to them. The mc isn't stupidly op from the start. He uses his brains a lot to get through situations. Which is a plus in my book because I love it when the mc has a brain and uses it. And the skills are not generic they actually have real thought put into them.If this was really a game I would love to play it.And for once I don't mind the actual real world interactions after a couple chapters of gameplay. That's about as much as I can say without spoilers.But the release rate is very steady. There is a lot of world building in the background without being monotonous. And because of everything listed so far I have left one of my very few reviews. ☺️
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