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Petition to ban the auther for giving me brain damage ,and I read till chapter 30,it's brain cancer inducing rubbish heap of a thirsty auther with nothing better to do.
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I agree with a previous poster about how the author Draaaggggggsssss the story to the extreme. Chapters 6 (I think) through 25 are all about ONE fight....and it's still going. This story seemed interesting, but it's too much of a points vacuum.
I just wrote this review to warn people about his girlfriend corpse got raped. although author said there is no netorare. but I don't want give bad rating for this point.
Hello my lovely readers.... Who missed me?...... Hahahahaha, sorry for the update starvation.... Being busy with other things and I really needed the encouragements from you guys. It help writers to get feedback from their readers.
So it would be nice if you guys show support. Well would try and update three chapters this week.
Thank you for reading
Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.
Still to early to give a good review but I recommend reading this so far, Like allot of books this one starts out very good and has potential to keep growing but one downfall is almost everyone the mc trusts ends up back stabbing him, it's not that bad yet but I hope the author does not make this the normal trend of the book.
The plot and such is interesting, the mc has a system that expands his power, he can choose people to become the first cultivators and all in all, the system is there to change the whole world to a higher plane.(Examples: Low-grade martial world - > Mid-grade martial world)But, it's not interesting for me just because of one petty reason.The mc is a douchebag, he has three maids taking care of him and the youngest one is about 11 years old.But he scolds her like no tomorrow. Idk why!? She is just a young child! Why do you treat other children with care and your youngest maid gets scolded!?SHE IS 11 years old! And so innocent, I cant take that the mc isn't nice to her.Although I read to ch 24, I dont know if there is a reason why the mc treats his youngest maid so harsh, I dont care anymore, I drop it.(At first it's a little overboard teasing but it gets to scolding later/bullying)Saying 'shut up and behave' to a child.. Tsk tsk, it's your maid no less.
what can i say this story is very heartwarming story i didnt even notice time pass and cant count how many times i smiled reading this, i just hope author would do little by little time skip also make mc actually do little exercise to be fit when he goes highschool in the future over all i love the story. keep it up!
This is pretty bad. The MC is a Vampire with the mindset of a japanese isekai protag. Again. A Vampire. Who acts like he wants to be a messiah for humans. Plot is extremely forced, author comes up with the most convenient circumstances ever. His first platinum box was found because, as a Vampire, infiltrating a NON GUARDED NOBLE RESIDENCE BY THE WAY, he tripped over a flippin chair and accidentally found a hidden room. When he visits the black market? He gets stopped by a human and she says she isn’t scared because he doesn’t look to be a bad person and asks him to save her daughter. By the way, according to the author, said ‘good vampire’ is wearing a black cloak, coming out of the BLACK MARKET, and is flying. In my opinion, this author has no business writing a story on Vampires. But, oh well.
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