Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Good start to the story. waiting for more chapters. Keep up the good work!
I was completely hooked! The tension between Carmilla’s thirst for revenge and her forbidden love for Lucian is intense. The plot twists and dark romance make this story unforgettable.
of you want your fill on fluff, read this novel! I'm looking forward to the conclusion but I'm happy with the journey to this point! thank you author and bless you!
The plot is not bad. But the quality of the writing, the elaboration of the characters and the interactions between them do not allow to put more than 4.
Over all the character development is at a good pace. Also do more details on s rank and above . Alice power level should match her talent rank
It's a very promising book. I love the plot sequences so far and it has a different and refreshing story line from other transmigration books
this is a hidden gem all the best for the future. ?????????
"No, now what you should do is go to the far place from this country. Don't ever, ever come back here because these creatures are very strong in this country. So you have to leave and don't come back."
"As you wish Master," said Jester while giving potion.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
Never! Never!