Lets just say I dont quite understand much of this story. It is very clear that auther actually dont know what readers like. When we come a little into the story mc gets nerfed indirectly it seems like. It is like that because everything needs to be a challenge in one way or other. It becomes annoying to say the least.Mc is also strange. He is strangely hostile against everyone. On one trip he is very hostile early day for no reason, then goes to talk with them later for company. Like what?There are also useless sidestorys everywhere which doesnt move the story in a good direction. It feels like the mc never knows anything and just follows fate blindly without thinking what is smartest for his goal. It is like he is a braindead guy.It isnt a bad stort, and I have read 400 chapters till now. It is just that I expected more when it came to storyprogressing and mc.
Haha gotta say I enjoyed reading all the chapters available so far. Writing is great and entertaining. Although I often am not the biggest fan of romance, but if it done correctly I am all for it. Here, author might be going for it, but we shall see and find out. Good luck!
Narration is too good, character development of each one is awesome. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Looking forward for the character developments and more good story arcs.
so far so good. definitely not the average story. protag ain't no puss either, he seems smart, better than most of them I've come across
Hmm still morning. What better should i do?
Never!
"The answer of number one is a foolish human," said Mamat.
I flew to where the tournament was being held
The knights at the front lifted their shields to stop the arrows coming at them, there were some archers on top of the walls but it seemed the attack took them by surprise and they couldn't prepare enough men besides they had more to worry about than just them, there were still Robert's forces hiding inside the town, thanks to the ineptitude of the loyalists they were now effectively surrounded, and it was now the time to close the maws of the beast upon them.
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
"System" almost in a commanding tone, said Anton. Luckily, the system is not a person and it does not understand human feelings so it wasn't bothered by it's host's tone at all.
swibre. *