At first I was a bit confused by the different characters appearing all at once. I will like to suggest if the author could create a scene break to signify a change in the scene, maybe a( ***) in the middle will be just find. Above all, I enjoy reading the book. Keep up the good work!
First let me say this, I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!THIS STORY IS GOOOOODMC OBVIOUSLY ISNT NORMAL IN THE HEADAND ONCE AGAIN I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!!!!But still 5 stars
Extremely goodThose that prefer tribe online and other overpowered novels must read this superb novel at this moment it needs extreme support stabilizing it's release rate I request all to support this novel so that webnovel doesn't drop itI really want to continue reading this
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