The Perfect Beauty Sitting Next to Me at the School I Transferred To Is My Ex-GF

If you like exposition, useless fillers, repetition, excessive repetitive descriptions, and eventually plot movement every tens of chapters....this is for you. It had potential, but the writing style just screams filling out word count.

Good story. I like it )))                                                                                                                                                   

Very generic and low quality writing. Nothing to remember about. Nothing to recommend.                                                               

What you have so far is absolutely amazing. I cant find any fault besides the names which are hard to remember. THE story is emersive but not in your face that your filled and  overwhelmed with to much information. The side charachter loki juno is actually funn and has personality. It's good so far plus it's actually a book I like and don't want to role my eyes at how stupid the plot is. Definitely don't drop this.

For the mean time I could not give a strong reason on why should I give you Fullstar for the translation quality  since there was some errors kinda hard for me to read it for tje development of the story why is it focused only on one cou try what happen to others while you mention them for sometime i think its much better to also give them their own background in your novel i k ow it would be hard but its for the bettsr. the story is ki da slow for the development i dont know how are you going toi troducethe war in your story but goodluck

First 17 chapters are mazing i really liked it but i don’t really know what they look like may be after a time skip?And i need like a 100 chapter rn please with a cherry on top?