I love the premise of the story. The author did Justice to the characters and I love that! I will add this to my library and keep reading. Keep up the good work.
writer quality is top notch,the character design is a little off page(if that is a word) also it will be adviceable if the mc ( Theodore) could be a little special apart from his specialist in dagger and all that.something like, coming across a hidden artic or journal or having a hidden bloodline,the story development is above average but the fault lie that it is too plain author pls do something about that,thanx
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Our MC returned to the past, but an interesting twist is that the people of Earth had transmigrated to another world filled with monsters. The plot is not bad, but there are some stereotypes including siscon. Not my cup of tea, but give it a go.
As of Chapter 38Writing Quality: 4/5Decent writing quality with some grammer mistakes here and there. This does not spoil the reading process at all. However, it is not perfect therefore a 4/5 rating.Story Development: 4/5 The progress of the story is pretty fluid so far. However, the meeting with his friend seemed abit rushed. Besides that the overall story progression is good. However, there feels like a few issues. For example in their first fight against the enemy. They said his friend teleported the group far away. However, the phrasing made it seem as if they got back to the mountain in no time. Besides that minir issue, the story was smooth.Character Design: 4/5The character design for the main character is mediocre so far. He shows a sense of nostalgia but it can be seen as he is not giving a strong vibe that he is himself yet someone else (might be confusing) which he should based of how the character is played. However, the side character is amazing as the show of hardship and stress really comes through to you. Update Stability: 5/5I do not know how fast and consistent the updates are. I am just assuming that the updates are perfect and daily.World Background: 4/5Not much is known as the story is pretty short still. But a decent amount of information has been given. However, the power system seems one dimensional right now. As a somewhat wuxia story, there needs to be abilities or skills that enables the reader to visualise it. There also needs to be a form of crafting. Considering the titlte the MC has he should have all these bases covered. So i feel as if the world background is not fully out there yet.Overall: 4.2/5A good novel so far. However, this novel has alot of potential to become a great one. It has certain key moments that can pull in the reader as well have well rounded characters overall. This is a great story for people to pick up if they are in for the long run. I would personally say the biggest issue with this novel is the lack of chapters so far. As more chapters come in I will come out with a new review. Good job so far with the novel ?
This story really had me from day 1. This is a new author that is diving deep into his cultural. He does with great dialogue that flows into an immersive story. I really hope he finishes this story and gives us more. 5/5