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mmmmmmmmmm well nice interesting and kind of fresh storyline with some misunderstanding in between hope for more
The writing style and the grammar made my head hurt,though the story itself seems good.
Habitual author 5 star Read the novel please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please?
After reading many werewolves and/or system novels, I decided to give this one as my first review. I've read most of the existing reviews and decided to give my 2 cents.Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me. Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all.Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing.World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world.Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author. PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"
This story is nearly below average in everything. The grammar is abysmal, the characters aren't fleshed out ( but theirs only 25 as im currently writing this review, so it may change), and everything else seems *******ish. And listen guy, it's okay if you want to include dark themes like r@pe into your story but it has to make sense. Why after only 30 minutes of an apocalypse is rape already happening? Literally everyone would be trying to procure a safe haven and some supplies, nobody would even have the feckin time.The character interactions are cringy and the MC is already acting like an edge boi. Slow your roll man, take a deep breath and replan your story.
can't wait ✋ and excellent character development with ups and downs thriller , every thing in between it brings every emotion within you . . a progressive story and great one
"Plus Ddraig my plan requires firepower" Issei said as he promptly ripped off the box covers and began assembling the massive guns while listening to Now You're Gone by Basshunter on repeat. Not many songs appealed to him this was one of the few.
Suddenly there was a faint sound. "hei-hei, teacher is coming."
But there is a new fact, that there is cyanide-lvl max in coffee, this poison is very dangerous because it can caused people turned to toxid child desease just like a human.
Dark Residence
Dark took the knife and scratched his hand and then the blood flowed into the cauldron.