It’s a story about a misogynist in a misandrist world. BUt there’s hardly any difference in this world and any other generic plain medieval world on this platform. There are a lot of other minor things that bothered me enough to drop it without reading to full but I’ll mention the most glaring. The mc is supposed to be super smart but the author can’t write him smart. So they made others stupid. He will mention the most obvious common sense stuff and then say others were blown away by his intelligence. He’s basically the one eyed king in the land of blind.The world is misandrist but there’s hardly anything mentioned about it. (Except maybe male red light districts. If it even counts as one.) And the repeated (and frankly stupid in this kind of story based novel) trope about mc ”conquering” women to the point of belief reversal with his tool. Anyway I’ve avoided spoilers (I think). This was not for me. Though author’s grammar is fine(which is a prize here), the writing itself can be improved.
It’ good it just needs a lot more chapters. I like the storyline to it looks very interesting just try to spam out chapters especially when it’ earlys try to expand with the transmigration part to
Is this the original novel or a copy?If it's original, please keep the chapter updated, if it's a copy, please tell me the name of the original novel
It would be always hard to lose a dear someone. Grief would never go away. We just have to learn how to live with it.A good story with a great plot. The author just needs to pay attention to the sentence structures. Sometimes there are very long paragraphs that should be divided into a few. It helps the readers to read smoothly
It's a very nice novel. I am usually very fed up from work and stuff but this novel keeps me hooked up during my free time and I would recommend it to all the readers to give it a shot.
Had been enjoying it a lot for the first 25 or something chapters.A wish fulfilment type investigation novel with no romance contrary to the title.Then came the Japanese hospital?.. now dropping it at chapter 27. Gonna check again in the future, if selected, whether it is a one time thing or not.
This is a great story i really hope this is gonna get chosen we must all vote this we must not let a Masterpiece like this fail because of people we must push this to the top! All hail The Foodies!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a very good book but I didn't read it I'm sorry you did all of that work but it just didn't interest me but I hope I speck for most people who read this that it is a very good novel
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This is a really awesome story that can trap anyone . I don't have words to express this awesome novel.Thanks, author for sharing the novel ?.
This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer.However, I have a few issues:1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! )2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective.3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though.All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !