Dex/Clair's Adventure

First of all there is a lot of Netorare so if you are not comfortable with that do not read this. The story itself is ok but nothing really stands out so far besides the NTR aspects.

Another pet novel i hope this will be great and i will be starting to read it hehe cause the other novel I'm reading is to slow update....?

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Great work, I'm eager to see how this story will develop! The kingdom building and action parts are quite balanced, and the protagonist isn't a scaredy cat. It seems like the relationship between the two universes is not forgotten, and we can await other invaders from the original universe sometime later. Keep up the good work!

The author only uses question marks and random commas… doesn’t even use quotation marks for dialogue. This makes the story into a complete mess. Also, the chapters are really short like 4 chapters should be put together just to be a normal length. Don’t waste your time reading this mess.

This is a rather mediocre story. The plot isn’t going anywhere. You would think being turned into a zombie in the apocalypse would force hard decisions, but, nope, the main character is just a nice girl that doesn’t struggle at all. The characters are one-dimensional (either perfectly good or perfectly evil). Entire chapters are nothing but trash talk. Overall, very slow and boring.