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1. You have a dig bick 2. You read that wrong 4. I skipped 3 5. If you understood 1 your SuS 6. You probably haven't read the novel and your here 7. Start reading
Novel has potential. Currently, I am on chapter 53. But no matter how I think about it, it feels like the novel is currently lacking something. Perhaps you are introducing character too early. Or the readers didn't have enough time to connect with the characters. For whatever the reason might be, after you introduced other character POV, the novel feels kind of bland. There was this one novel I read 3 days ago. And after reading 10 chapters I was hooked up onto it. In the case of this novel, it didn't occur. Kind of feels like I am forcing myself to read this. Sorry author, but as of now I will drop this. After the novel crosses 100 chapters, i will return again to binge read it.
good???????its a relaxing novel all you have to do is enjoy.and the mc was strong from the start as he used to train do.??its funny too
Wow, that's really amazing. It's the first time I've really come across this kind of farming novel. The novel about cultivation relates to the law that knowledge is power. Also the hero reminds me of Leylin's character from the novel Magus The Wizard's World, a hero eager to know. My only wish or advice if this is true is to make the viewer see the progress of the hero step by step, do not jump at the time, I know that this is difficult, but try as much as you can, because this way you will succeed in attracting the audience also. Try to make the cultivation system deep in the sense that there are many requirements for progress In cultivation, strict conditions and provisions do not make progress just absorbing qi, and the last thing that I hope to focus on is to make between one level and another great difference as big as heaven and earth, like even if they turn 1000 cultivators collecting qi fighting someone at the level of the institution, he will defeat them without Any fatigue or injury will make the narration strict rules. The viewer will also be excited when the hero reaches a new great level because the viewer will really feel that there is a difference between the levels. Also try to make farmers rare, mysterious and revered things that have their own rules. Give each level a right of respect, such as the level of the foundation institution. Make in Taif the number of people who reached this level approximately 100 people. This will give the viewer really the difficulty of farming, and every time the hero rises a new level was People like him are less. In short, give each level its status. Do not make everything fodder for the defender. If you want advice, do not care about it. Did you not like it, which is to add something like a chip from the novels of Magus, the Wizard's World, and similar novels that will be really interesting? Imagine with me "The farmer who seeks knowledge in a world "Mysterious and Dark Cultivation" and that's all I have. I hope it helped you. You are free to reject all my advice. Thank you for your time.
I enjoyed reading your chapters. It has so much potential. The plot of the story was so interesting and engaging.Pls keep writing and Do not stop bringing interesting story to your audience.
This novel is amazing. It should definitely be picked. I have read a lot of novels throughout the years and I can say this with complete assurance it is one of the few masterpieces. it is filled with action and comedy, adventure and great world building, everything seems to real and fantastic at the same time...I would strongly recommend this novel to both a new reader and a veteran!!!!
To talk about his writing, he has a good grasp, but he makes it messy and very confusing to read. The goals are not clear. The mc is kinda boring. So if you looking for anything except these then the story is yours. But if you are looking for a smart mc and a constant development then it's not the story u should read.
I think the synopsis is really captivating and it's really interesting and I really want to read more. I'm looking forward to reading more, continue your great work Author.
Gracias por escribir la historia pero es muy poco. espero q escribas mas la historia saludod
The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar. That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.
Its a good novel if you don’t care about world building or any information at all about the character/side characters. This is primarily a gaming novel where the content is all about the MLs gameplay. (Some details of gameplay are also sketchily unrealistic but still passable) It is good for what it is but it keeps hinting at something happening to his normal life but nothing is known about his circumstances even after 60 chapters. Obviously the author is trying to tease the readers to do a huge reveal about the orphaned “lolis” but since its barely mentioned, as a reader I’m not even curious. The actual ML has a pretty good chara compared to other ML gaming leads and knows how to do party plays instead of only solo. Also the in game strategy is mostly realistically op. So if you’re interested in pretty good VRMMO novel it deserves a look.