Author I found the idea of the story very good and a proposal quite different from what we see even in fantasy books released in bookstores, I liked the visual a little steam punk that is portrayed, but I think it lacks a little experience in writing da pra perceive that you do not have much experience and the chapters are very short , Honestly, if I had read this synopsis of your book in a bookstore I would buy, because it is something very different from what we see today, the characters also found interesting the choice of each oneI kept really imagining such a book as a sequel like percy jackson and others . Simply put you held me very well in the story
