Harem Quest: Love or Escape?

If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..Sorry, I am frustrated....

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I keep seeing the comparison that everyone else is a returner. Yes, the MC is abandoned by god too, but he is left to struggle and survive. It is a bit slow at the beginning, but it showcases the MC growth and emotional state. A recommended must read.

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author ?

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1. You have a dig bick 2. You read that wrong 4. I skipped 3 5. If you understood 1 your SuS 6. You probably haven't read the novel and your here 7. Start reading