TomzyGabs19
Setting is interesting, some characters are neat but the story is woefully inconsistent. The author writes things and then either ignores them or forgets about them. This leads to ham fisted plot devices and inconsistent characters.An example: the character describes a useful feature, the feature is automatically activated, and yet as the plot advances you realize it could have only happened in the way it did if the feature didnt work.Characters will say things to other characters but when the plot requires it its like they never did, like that part of their character only exists when necessary.MC also alternates between extremely foolish and unrealistically smart. Hes more concerned with face slapping than development but also thinks bad people will just be nice again.Oh and also, I feel this needs to be said he is very cruel to an innocent woman and I wont say more to spoil that. Its not worth reading beyond free. Author needs to keep track of what he writes about his characters, if he did that he could make full use of an otherwise brilliant setting.
What a nice novel about taming.. It's been a long time I read anything goodThe novel stands out for its fast-paced storytelling and well-crafted fight scenes.. Nice story keep going..
This book is an interesting book. I can't stop reading it. Kudas author
really like it till now hope the writing quality stays the same its very nice and immersive to read, im already invested lol the mc is really good too
‘S pretty good.Man used to be a borderline eunuch, now he isn’t lol, pretty much it. Why does this review have to be so long man blah blah blah ok finished
So in love with this one and can’t wait for more ??????
this book made me to enjoy web novel and am happy u an going to rate web novel 5.o for this
So, about this book, I have no words, Litrelly. If you are reading this review, then let me tell you this novel is amazing.First of all, seeing things from your perspective, You can see that the book's title is attractive. the extra theme is not unique but the way the author executed his Idea is unique.I have read all the chapters, Chapters maybe low in numbers for now but that doesn't mean the novel is terrible. In fact it's good novel and I'm looking forward for more chapters in future.So, Ladies and Gentlemen try the book and comment in this Review section to let me know, Did you also found this book a Masterpiece? Yeah, cause this will make me identify those who find 'this' book a Masterpiece.--Whith this author Ink_Waver122 is dismissed ---What's your thought?
The chapters are few, not cool man. Author update. Both of them are mafia gurus and I can not wait for him to tame her. He seems to be a step ahead and it is killing her.
Loving it so far but please upload more often author-nim?
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Me encantó, desde el comienzo la historia te atrapa y te dejan con ganas de seguir leyendo.
