The Deathbringer

Very good novel so far. .. .. .. .. .. ..

Great read, a very good attempt from a novice author. The story plot is quite engrossing which you don't get much of trom the 'R-18' tag. Character development is greatly done too.There are a few mistakes here and there and forced scenes(but hey that's what most of us are reading it right?) and attempts to make things complex but overall a great read.

Though I had read only a few chapters but they are enough to hook me up. World Background- The world setting is really Exhilirating. I liked the way author gave a detailed info about everything. character setting- Characters are good. it's not hard to relate and understand their views, which I found good because it helped me to connect to the story. plot setting- The plot seems to be revolving around the royal and castle things, which is a nice one. I liked the plot setting. The only thing which somehow poked is there are way too long paragraphs and dialogue are incorporated into it. which somehow becomes boring to read for a longer times. and also the explanation is quite much. Rest all the things I loved about it. keep it up author, written in a good way.

Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.

The first work of TJSS and also one of the novels that i already finished reading that made me satisfied with good ending. This is worth reading even if its a harem since the author made development with them and mc. My problem only is that Qidian International stole the translations of Wuxiaworld.

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