I finally surpassed the 50k words, so I guess it's a good time for a shameless author review...or maybe not exactly, I don't know.Think of this web novel as a prototype, I intend (if possible) to make it better and more engaging before publishing it as a book (probably on Kindle or something like that) so some things are prone to change in the future after all this is also kinda like practice for me.Anyway, I hope you give this a try, is not some masterpiece and is still just at the start, but im quite proud of this web novel.
very well written and characterized. It seems to be running a smooth plot as it seems so with the first few chapters that have been available for reading so far.
Thisb is the real deal looks like your still good with the pen/keyboard hope to see the story progress further
I'm really enjoying this story and very interesting to read... good job author ? ??
I'm already addicted to this novel!!!!!! I can't stop checking on here to see if there's a new chapter and sometimes I reread it. I've read some of this author's other books and they're good too. I highly recommend this!
I love the writing style, ngl. I'm looking forward to more chapters ^^
the story is good and the character is good
muy buena historia,espero que la sigan apoyando.
I did don't drop a review I have not done justice to this book.
All I wanted in the story are all here. Mafia, arranged marriage, forbidden romance. Did you made this story for me, Emmanuel? Lol! I will definitely read this one!
i've read until chapter 10. to be honest, i feel that the main character is so ridiculously op. i don't know if it's good or bad. please don't add harem sir author
With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.