nice story work and script for the book when I read
EPIC so far, chap 70Mc is great, the side characters are greatThe vib between his 3 tops guys feels a lot like guardians of the galaxy. Great chemistry.Great dark humour, pacing is excellentLove how often the mc’s deeds are making the apocalyptic world a better place and he is not even trying My top 3 most enjoyable first 70 chapters!Keep up the excellent work!
As I'm about to reach 100 chapters, I think it is best to leave a review now. Writing Quality: I leave it 5 since, although alterations slowly appeared, I am consistent on the quality, from complex to simple, as I'm also experimenting and learning along the way. If you dislike something, do let me know!Stability of Updates: It's undeniable that the first month's updates sucks, but after I got into premium, I have been consistent in updating 2 chapters per day. Although I wonder how will I be able to remain consistent while studying in a state university, but, hey, I'm trying my best!Story Development: A shameless five stars. Firstly, my foreshadowing and my not outlined plan in my head has been consistently written with some alterations, of course. Secondly, although I have yet to end the volume 1, I am confident that the development will lead to what I have envisioned as I was meticulously setting those flags. Lastly and most importantly, the story development are deeply aligned to the characters and world background without straining each other.Character Design: Another shameless five stars. From Qwanisha to others, they have a very dinstict character aspects, that even I, the author, felt like I was not writing what they are supposed to say, but narrating what they are saying. Comically, even I found my side characters unpredictable--of course, except my main character since we can easily familiriaze how he reacts. As the MC and his beasts are the limelight, I am trying my best to design a likeable different characters of his beasts.World Background: Another shameless 5 stars. I introduced races and was trying my best to put emphasize to them--faeries, luminaries, something you weren't familiar with. These races are relevant on their relationship with the humans, especially the main character and side characters. Of course, we should talk about the Tower--It is an existence that challenges the invited players to ascend each floor. I am currently focused in The Trial, as it covers two volume--Volume 1: Hellish Trial, Volume 2: Heart of the Burg. However, the Trial already emanated the challenges of each floor should be, resulting on taking some time to formulate it to the best of my abilities. In addition, the world building has a heavy emphasis on this story, as the world not only revolve around the Tower but the Earth, i.e. its current state, technology, etc.FAQ 1: Will there be romance author?As of now, I haven't decided on the female lead yet, so it might happen on Volume 3.FAQ 2: Harem?Sadly, no. I'm not into an idea of being in a relationship with more than one.FAQ 3: Is MC an idiot?Hmm, if you are used to being alone and have faced the harshness of the reality, you will have a different values and vision. He might commit some mistakes, but he'll continue to learn.FAQ 4: Aren't you shameless for giving your first review and rated it as 5 stars?I am, no doubt, an author who disliked his stories, but this one... I like it. Since I am the first to give a review, why won't I be biased? XDNow read it and let me know your thoughts!
this is becoming more interesting the more I read
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
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boa estória com bons personagens, protagonistas bem carismáticas e divertidas e os secundários também são legais. Bônus por eu compartilhar pela frustração da autora de Hamefura não ter YURi yuri
Your writing style is quite unique and different form others.Story is also great and it is full of excitement and curiosity and twists.I hope you will not make me disappointed in upcoming story.I am hoping more and more interesting story.
Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. First of all, I want to thank all the readers for their attention and support! I am very much looking forward to hearing your views and suggestions on the novel. If you have any thoughts, such as about the plot or character development, please feel free to express them here. I will carefully read every piece of feedback and make adjustments and modifications based on your opinions.
Best book ive been reading so far love the plot and lore ???
I absolutely love this novel. The way the author captures the characters' struggles and inner thoughts is so vivid, it feels like you’re experiencing it yourself. I just hope the updates come more regularly!
Nicely done...Keep up the good work.i see good potential in this story though too much cliche to someone become rich like that .It seems like a fantasy .