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I really love your blurb and your book is really interesting. I love the relationship Mirabella and Michal share. I can't wait to keep reading. Good job, Author.

Yo what is with the new wave of pilot reads they all look like they would make for some good stories--------------------------------------------------

The story is fast paced but not rushed, have a unique start different from other novel out there. Besides from bad grammar this novel has a lot potential in it. The character development is pretty good like how the mc adapt with the situation is not same, he will learn from mistakes.The romance is a bit rushed but pretty decent.

The story is great - aside from the pure amount of content and the frequency of updates, there is the amazing world-building - the magic system, stats and the quests.The idea to make the MC always be accompanied by someone is a really smart idea especially when it comes to the comedic aspects of a story.I like the speed at which the story progresses, the MC gets new spells and increases their stats quickly, but that is to be expected at low levels.My only suggestion is that the combat scenes tend to be pretty short - I understand this may not be a combat-centric series but I think they dealt with the boar a bit too quickly for example.Overall great series with an interesting setting that is rewarding to read thanks to the character progression.

but lets believe in our main character!!! fighting!!!

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