1. Amber was employed by the MC to be his secretary, but I'm guessing the many chapters of Amber not making an appearance caused chatGPT to forget about her existence since in a later chapter, his secretary is someone else?2. All that interaction and romantic tension with Amber and yet the author just kind of forgot about her. When she reappeared it felt more like "Oh damn, I forgot she existed. Better write her back in" from the author.3. The MC already met with the president and yet in a later chapter the president goes "I can finally meet the man of innovation". Either chatGPT memory is lacking or the author is going too fast to the point of forgetting their own story. it wasnt even that long ago of the MC meeting the president before this chapter.4. Almost every dialouge just feels the same. Constant usage of similar phrases and the way every dialogue ends as well is the same. Might want to experiment with dialogue to change stuff up because its hard NOT to notice dialogue feeling and sounding the same when I read them.Overall: I like the story, I just hope the Author puts more attention to detail like with Amber's existence and the MC meeting the president for the first time TWICE. Whether or not the author uses AI in their writing, I dont care, Just pay attention to your own writing and story and avoid these minor inconsistencies. They may be minor in your eyes, but they can really derail a reader from the story since they'll beq+q focusing on the thought of "Didnt he already meet the president though?". There's alot of timeskipping too, maybe thats the cause of these inconsistencies since the story is moving fast, very fast. Hope that from the chapter im currently on, I dont see anymore inconsistencies. what caused me to write this review was really because the MC's secretary wasnt Amber, who was formally employed at the end of a chapter, but a background character.
Good start, doesn't have many flaws in grammar and pacing is good as well. looking forward to it
It's been over a year now, figured I might as well do the obligatory five-star author review.Honestly don't know what to put here other than I hope you like dark fantasy. To be more specific this is a casual fantasy world on the brink of entering its industrial revolution era with some dark themes and moments being its main driving force for the story.The first two volumes follow Lucilla's (Also known as Ruby) origins, showing us where she starts before transforming into the villain that the world told her she was. All so she can protect those she holds dear.I guess I should change the synopses since at the time of writing this that is a little out of date.Bye see you later!
Usual, the author didn't forget to include the MC's dramatic backstory. Kinda feel sorry for all your male lead characters, author.
Good work bro! But the only thing you lack is the sequence of publishing your chapters otherwise your story is amazing and twisted too?
This is a really hot read, the mc is such a beta lol. I'm still hoping the Hero will get betrayed by having 'his' girls start to love Leon more.
This is my second time writing a review, and just like the first, this is still one of the best stories I've read. Alvara and Cleenah are my favourite future wives for Amael, and I hope the author ensures Alvara stays with Amael no matter where he goes, even in the Underworld arc. I also hope Amael will become overpowered soon since his enemies are gods. I hope he’s OP after Game 2. As always, 5 stars—thank you, Nihilruler! Keep up the amazing work!
Amazing story so far. The story itself is well-written, and while the writing quality could be worked on, the grammar is nigh immaculate. The first incident isn't really unique, but the author does a good job portraying it as such. Keep up the good work, author!
I'm so sticking with the Delvin character, I'm expecting huge things from Him ♥
As the chapters progress, it's strange and unusual, there's a lot of mystery around the main characters, and it makes me look forward to what's next every time 9/10Building the world, this world, people live in the standard of strong and weak, reputation and status, there are all kinds of heroes and demons spread in the world spreading their names, anyway, the power system is unique, and is based on 4 aspects, talent, weapon, and which They call it the ego, the path, the most mysterious yet, the level. There are still no higher worlds or anything that indicates this, the highest level is rank 8, the cultures in this story are divided between 4 cultures, the Morim, the nobles, the magicians, and the monster humans.I give it 10/10, that's unique and exciting The fights are simply amazing, at first the difference is huge, but in close battles, intelligence, cunning, courage and different styles are displayed. There are events brewing, and tribes are fighting, everyone is doing their job based on their interests, and that makes it more exciting than just random fighting. There is no harem yet, and there is no exact indication of it. There are some minor hints of romance, but they have no impact on events. This is a genius move, author. Yes, definitely, 10/10!
Don’t ask why…………………………………………………………………….
this is the first story I have read on this platform in which location is in India