The story is very good, the rhythm worries me a little I would like to see more the part in which he becomes professional goes to the base of a team and everything else, makes the story more dynamic and holds the reader with situations that he is familiar, but the story so far is very good and with potential.
rare plot, great potential, good plot, and honestly it gives off versatile superstar vibs. good gob author hungry for more.
My biggest three issues in the novel can all be solved with some editing, I mean I swear it was over a hundred chapters before suite was spelled as suite instead of suit. He'd go to his suit, shower and change into his suit, before leaving his suit headed to someone else's suit. Besides editing stuff though, I really like the story and binged all 249 chapters. Also, not what I was expecting when I read the synopsis.
Story is decent, but needs more improvemnt in terms of world building, the characters need to be fleshed out more so that they dont seem like npc's. another thing is harem tag just annoys me man just make a 1 on 1 relation between the mc and the love intrest rather than him going around baning multiple other heroines.
Honeslty I like the concept but the mc's senior brother who is the sect leader flat out ruins the novel for me. Such an incredibly forced character. To say he's bad at pill refining is an understatement but the author has created him as a character who childishly and stubbornly refuses to accept that fact, and instead of actual effort/development, it becomes a meme that trashes the novel. The sheer obliviousness to his own failure makes it an absolute joke.
An interesting story with a great start, I've never read anything related to video games so I found it so interesting and directly jumping from 2021 to 2164 wow keep going your imagination I honestly love your novel?
Another Translation group already Translated this Novel.you guys can go and read that for free.webnovel just copypaste that translation group hard work.this Novel will ruined by webnovel.
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If your looking for a good romance and don't have a problem with the girl being the lead in the relationship I would definitely recommend it. This book quickly got me hooked, I have not noticed any errors in the writing and the character development is amazing. I am currently on ch 45 and my only comment is I hope that the author doesn't get so caught up in Sam's character growth they forget about Lena(this has not been a problem so far)
Really enjoyed this, partly because of how much I can relate to the first MC. What's weird was other than the novel in general I found the way you write really captivating, it was really seductive I guess? but the fact that you killed off the MC is extremely disappointing, He was one of the reason I was reading the novel other than the way you write. I probably won't continue reading this unless the MC somehow revives which is not likely since the guy with no balls and less interesting Character got a system. Either way the plot twists and fights were amazing. it's solid 5 or 4.9 but you know what happened for It to be 4.6, tbh I was curious about his memories of his late father but whatever.
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You are doing god's work, it is so much better without all the racism and nationism, and China is racist af but that's a norm for them, and in western there are racist but everyone is so sensitive to it that you can't even make a joke, things like culture appropriation dominant but it is a joke, and woke people are just... sigh..... and too many movement that separate us instead of uniting us.thank you for your work.