Divine Wings

brilliant Barion...just as i silently hope for...i thought it wont happen...weeehhhh

Do not expect this to be some literature masterpiece going in. In fact don't expect much and just disengage your brain and go for the ride. Its not the best ride either because you're going to get clichés and we'll worn tropes snacking your face left right and centre. Borrowing from another trope, this story is like a MC/young master going out to town smacking everyone in the face.Back to the review - the intertidal ideas of the story is interesting. Unfortunately it's quickly suppressed by the clichés. Accompanied by a lot of things that just ate not explained or are assumed, your basically left with a story that's got very little substance. It would seem to me that the author has just pulled ideas out of their nether regions and chained them together into some semblance of a story.There's really no logic to any of this.Read with caution... Just don't think too hard about this story or you'll just end up spitting up your blood essence in frustration or something... ?

Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.

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