Divine Wings - Reviews

brilliant Barion...just as i silently hope for...i thought it wont happen...weeehhhh

Do not expect this to be some literature masterpiece going in. In fact don't expect much and just disengage your brain and go for the ride. Its not the best ride either because you're going to get clichés and we'll worn tropes snacking your face left right and centre. Borrowing from another trope, this story is like a MC/young master going out to town smacking everyone in the face.Back to the review - the intertidal ideas of the story is interesting. Unfortunately it's quickly suppressed by the clichés. Accompanied by a lot of things that just ate not explained or are assumed, your basically left with a story that's got very little substance. It would seem to me that the author has just pulled ideas out of their nether regions and chained them together into some semblance of a story.There's really no logic to any of this.Read with caution... Just don't think too hard about this story or you'll just end up spitting up your blood essence in frustration or something... ?

Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.

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i accidentally  add this to my list  but surely love it im hoping more chapter author love lots ❣️

(Spoiler Alert!!!) The protagonist has crossed the time to the very distant future and becomes a person who is only at the first level of violet Qi (the lowest!) I think Leng San's grandpa made a good choice that he let his grandson get away from the Asuras, which destroyed the Leng family. The ml is reborn in the next 1500 years along with the Deva named Freya. She's a guardian to protect and support Leng San such as helping him improve his Qi, inventing the potion recipe, teaching the martial arts, etc. And the story progression has continued along with the battle, revenge, and love story. It's worth reading because there are many emotions in this book, and the story telling and translation are the best!!!

MISUK: SAMCHON you're not going to take me inside???

Well, i Write this for fun anyway so first of all, Thank you to the Author for writing this wonderful book. Without you, mallaza would never be born, one thing i hope or should i say.... a request? Please stabilize the chapters release at least one chapter per day for 5 days in a week, the more the better. Darn, i lost some inspiration now, i hope you as healthy as always and everyday in your life are going to be an awesome day for you. Keep writting, because once you pick the pen you shoulder many expectations, anticipation, and dreams of all your readers. You are a gifted man, in this aspect, the talented is always get obstructed by many challenges and i hope you remember of what i said earlier, never give up. It's okay to take a rest sometimes, but please, never abandon your another life as an author. Inspiration, everybody have it. But to change them into words and inspire another people, that's rare if you take into accounts Millions of people. Even if it's just a Line of poem can change people lives. So, all the best, may Allah bless you and your family?.(P.S: Sorry for my bad English?)

Spear laughs at the barely audible last remark but hurries to collect his papers and inserts them in his inventory before reluctantly leaving Realm Night's room. Night could only roll his eyes and glare at the man to move out of his room quickly. Realm Night followed soon behind Spear although he didn't forget setting up his seals back in place. With a few taps on something unseen to anybody but Night, the little mess created by their little scuffle returns to its clean and orderly state and the dimming magic circle fades completely along with the knife that had clattered to the ground. Several other patterns fills the air and locks on to certain places and position before fading away with the soft click of the door's lock. Realm Night taps an armoured finger to his door as more pattern swirls on it before fading into nothing.

Mesa took a deep breath and asked " Sir, What do you mean by taking me? You mean I won't come back here again? "