Shameless author review, this is my first contract work, so of course, I'm going to support myself, however, I hope you all enjoy the story and as a fellow elder in the Yandere sect who studied the Yandere dao to the pinnacle, this work will have a ton of Yandere, who knows maybe I even make a new subspecies of Yandere Waifu, expect chad MC, with a ruthless behavior, but yeah enjoy the plot if you know what I mean, and a power fantasy that can scratch that op itch
okay this is my last review for this novel i try and give it a go but it didnt get any better and it become MTL and your fking charging money with this kind of translation? so i will just point it out a bit so Zi Luan is looking for saint fruit to cure her but the old dude told her that his whole sect betray him and ruin him telling her not to trust elder Bai and leave asap but the Zi Luan the idiot still want the fruit and they even put poison in the fruit and she still want to eat the fruit? why not test it first to see if the fruit is safe to eat? and this is one of the stupid char in the novel and there are a lot more.. so im just saving you sometime dont read this trash or waste your time because it not worth it, I'm done with this novel also.
Terrible Grammar, really bad character development, bad world background illustration, no character growth and worst of all starting with an MC that is 70+ years old? No thanks. I guess this novel has this high rating because he deletes reviews with low rating otherwise I dont know what you people in the 5 star review section are smoking to give such rating.Note! if this comment is deleted I will be posting a Screenshot of posting this review to prove it was deleted. Thank you.
Very good. 100% recommend to read. Kept me engaged from beginning to the latest chapter.
don't wast your time by reading or using fb or coin's it's a waste of Time
UNDERATED- Overall rating 4.8/5 (I'm lenient when I review)SHORT CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 118 chaptersAs of the time I'm writing this, it's been 4 months. The amount of recognition this work is getting is pitifully low for what it deserves. It's a solid read for webnovel standards. The story develops quite nicely and besides the beginning which is a little slow, the pacing is good. There are many interesting ideas in the novel and the author does well to execute them. Many novels on here have interesting ideas, but the execution tends to fail. Here, it's quite clear and well explained. I'm not really sure why this novel isn't popular. Perhaps its because some people think its similar to Supremacy Games? (I haven't read that so I can't comment) Maybe it's the little slow start? The other point I could think of would be characters. Personally, I am pleased with the MC of this story. Kind, Silly, Misfortunate, kind of a gag character because of his gambling addiction, Naïve (which he grows out of), perhaps these traits shove away people expecting a ruthless, cold, selfish, anti-hero-like character, pragmatic character, survival of the fittest because the story is a survival game which people expect. It's a shame. It's refreshing to have a more morally good character in such a story. The Mc is very close to his family and has shared his secrets with them (Father and little Sister), which I suppose some people don't like because it's 'Stupid'. Yes yes indeed but not every mc can hold such burdens or secrets within their heart. The MC here actually feels much more human.I've also noticed that some people don't like the Little Sister, but personally I quite like her. Brocon aside, having seen many characters like her in other works, she is much much more on the likable side. She can be seen as annoying, clingy, but readers fail to see that its a very close brotherly and sister relationship. She is executed well.I hope people are more willing to give this novel a shot. It really deserves better.Shipping wise, it is intended to be 3 potential love interests. 118 chapters in, there's only been 1 that has been having the screen time. The other 2 are up in the air in regards to if they have appeared or not. I am looking forward to it. Hopefully I get some romantic drama with 1 heroine winning at the end.
Author's shameless 5 star review.Hi guys, so this novel will be the second novel I have published here, I am publishing it for the Fantasy Carnival and I hope to get a good score there. Anyway, if you have read my previous novel, then you will be familiar with the system, if not, don't worry, it's nothing complicated.The novel is a dark one, the main character is not like the one, or ones in my previous novel.So expect a dark world where the main character needs to navigate in order to survive and raise his power.
I see no reviews yet, so hey, first.I'm really ashamed, what have I done. I've abandoned my morals, and for what, everlasting glory? Bah! Meaningless!
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so far so good am so impressed with everything about the book except for the lack of update,I know u are trying your best because it's not easy writing such an amazing book and I take delight in reading it thank u so much for your hard work.
Please keep on updating at least 4 ch/week. I like game developer mc but there are only very few. So keep on improving your writing style and don't make it fast. Or slow. If the mc could copy original classic game from earth like plant vs zombies, bandicoot,mario,etc and then gradually go to big game then that would be great. Another novel that has similar story but there the mc stopped updating his game after releasing it and even forget about it. So it would be great if you don't do that and have the mc care about his game and him his fan constant updates on games. If you wanna write a similar web novel, then try making a novel where the mc start his webnovel company. This idea is also fresh and could be great but for now plz focus on this and give us new chapters and keep improving your writing style and storytelling.
Okay I have read just the few chapters and let me say it is not dissapointing and it is actually Great. Contrary to what you would expect, it isnt one of those less detailed and very slow paced type of novels. Although it is slow paced its not "THAT" slow and you can actually feel the story progress as long as you give it time, it also contains more detail compared to the regular stories that have a fast pace which helps the story progress smoothly. So this is just my first part of review and I will change it later. See you guys again