Cool Plot and interesting MC! Please keep the story going ?
The story is great and has great potential.
Haven't read it yet but I have high expectations. You ask why? There is no female protagonist and no romance. You don't see these two side by side every day. I hope the story is good and another wish is that this story won't be paid later.
Excellent story! One of the better systems I've ever read. Keep up the great work author.
I really like the story so far. It's very pleasant to read and also very easy to understand. I'm definitely looking forward and hope that this story will go on for a long time...it definitely has a lot of potential ??
The novel starts strong and builds a solid foundation... Only to build the story in a completely different area.Interesting premise and writing style. The author focuses on the 2 brother's storline utilizing the different circumstances of each to build the world and write the lore. The contrast is further used to go from micro to macro and from personal to political. Great usage and contrast. The concept is similar to RR Martin's Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) though this one is a web novel version and isnt as professionally done. Thats it for the good parts of this novel.Where this novel falls short is on focus and continuity. The set up at the start was great and would have been interesting if there was a follow through. The abandonment and trechery with lies should have had more impact on the characters but apart for setting there doesnt seem to be much effect on their personalities and character development. 1 MC was sentenced to death and seems to quickly recover and is too trusting too fast with people, there seems to be little to no trauma considering all that abuse and injustice. Its almost the same with the 2nd MC with everything being resolved by his bilief and hope that his brother survived and the flimsy and simple justification of 'would you have allowed it' reasoning for filicide (parent killing their child). Then theres the setting, sending a child to an academy and underutilizing the theme. The academy setting felt wasted and unnecessary quickly followed by politics meetings to arrange meeting. The forest of death quickly became the forest of looting and levelling up and all the built up tension was lost. In short the author planted too many seeds too early resulting in what feels like forgettable chapters and mini arcs.The beasts are unique from each other but familiar in lore which is the result of good choices from the author. Theres personality with each one but not enough that it fills the novel excessively. The author also doesnt fall into the temptation of making them too overpowered or pulling out world breaking mythical beasts left and right.This novel has great potential and I am invested in reading further in hopes of it getting better. Planning for main and subplots and relating that to character development definitely needs work however the writing style and world building leaves enough room to recover.The strengths definitely make up for the foils.
amazing story ?????worth reading✨✨✨✨✨author's writing quality and the way he design the story is super ???
Everythings look promising in the first chapter, second one worse, totally acceptable, third? I think it is time to part our ways.Thw world building in the first chapters is not yet clear. Fine, he is a king, then how much power can he weild? Half figurehead like that of HRE emperors? Or that of centralised Sun King? Or even Dark age Feudal vassal? Now come to the character, MC is totally wrong me. He was a King for a God's sake, and adopt random people as his kins? Overpaid his vassals?The mentioned IQ260 is a running joke here. I'm pretty sure that any student who studied science would have learn that saltpetre is a component of explosive in university if not high school? Successful engineer? Tch.And what kind of peasant's mentality is that? "you paid us 40% more wage and I will die for you?" if that works, all the motivational expert is useless then?And for the knights? They are too loyal for a person to be in that situation.
You know that a book is good when you see that the author is DiceVR. Fyi he was the creator of "spending my retirement in a game
I had read since the released of 200+ chapters, this novel never fail to let me down. Probably one of the most well-written novel out there, the mc and his gang, the bromances and the fighting, everything just amazed me
Really enjoy reading this. Its really nicely descriptive , adding a nice touch to the mood the author intends without directly saying it and the storyline will keep you on the Edge of your seat!! Loving it so far so keep up the good work author!!
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