A young boy caught in the tides of time finds himself pursued by dark beings that seek his unique power for their own ends, and must break the cycle before he joins their ranks.
writing quality: Smooth reading with very few grammer mistakes.Story development: Well paced story however the direction is unclear giving a mysterious yet confusing feeling, leaving one curious.Character design: Characters are unique with in depth personal traits and quirks. Characters are described both physically and mentally.Updating stability: 1 chapter per day however it is I'll tril read World background: Mostly the school is what the plot js currently surrounded around. However, there are hints and facts proving or portraying the world as an alternate earth.
This book is highly annoying. MC acts like he’s twelve years old, but the author pretends he’s mature and steady and an ex-special forces member.So far, characters are typical and exceedingly one dimensional, the battles are boring, and the whole thing just feels like a generic cut and paste xianxia. Can not recommend.
good work for me,I would sayI like the MC's characterplease make room for explanation of cultivation levels.because so far the higher cultivation levels are a little confusing, I don't expect the reader to pause and start checking who's stronger than who.good and beautiful work so far, I hope it's eventually selected soonest.thanks.
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
I really like how a baddass woman is mavys. You go girl! I really really like the fighting scene, the author narrated it very well. I am looking forward to the another upcoming scenes of the three: mavys, her brother and her uncle?Overall the story is nice????????? good job authornim:)
