To be honest, the writing style is incredibly impressive. It only lacks two things, you need to learn how to write high paced enganging fight scenes and your writing lacks... i dont know how to put it, emotion? Make your charcters do what an actual person would have done. More depth, human like or relatable decisions and personality, then it would be perfect.
This story has a lot of potential. Though there are a lot of 'Jargons' — Terms that seem to be common in this world and not elaborated by the author, the story remains a good flow and pacing. The quality is also great, and so is the world building. The abilities they showcase are very intriguing, definitely clutching readers' intrigue and expectations.
First few chapters gave me the urge to read more. I like Baldwin character, the character building is good. I'm curious on what's next to come on next chapters.
Glad to see your comeback, and this book is now completely rewritten. Goodluck brother.
Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
update more chapters in the book please and do it regularly
Hola! Author's review here. Thanks for considering my book! If you're thinking of picking it up, here's why I think you won't be disappointed:- Premium drama, rejected and reclaimed tropes, and a gut-wrenching, hot villain – if these are your jam, you're in the right place!- A slow-burn romance with fast-paced intimacy: the main characters try to deny their attraction, but can't resist the mate bond.- A mischievous Moon Goddess with a penchant for twisted romance and matchmaking.- Explicit, dark themes, and hot content – this book has it all!- An overbearing mother-in-law and a scheming, jealous side character – and that's just the beginning!I'll leave the rest for you to discover. If you're sensitive to the mentioned themes, you might want to look elsewhere. Otherwise, I hope you'll dive in!Please support this book with your daily votes, gifts, and comments. Thank you so much! <3
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The storyline is fascinating, a good illustration and flow of the story. A wonderful work the author is doing, recommendable work. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️❤️ ❤️
nice book great job author .............