There is no nice way to put this: This writer is barely literate. They have no idea how to write a complete sentence, let alone a complete thought. It was nigh impossible to understand just the first paragraph of the story. Please, people, I beg of you: You do not have to "publish" your story just because you wrote it. Learn how to write first. Keep writing and keep reading--really, I'm encouraging you to keep it up--but you can't honestly expect people to enjoy your story if you write at the level of a 3rd grader.
Hello, I am the author of this novel, and I want to share a few things with you: 1. You can ask any questions or share your doubts here or in the chapter comments. I will reply within 5 minutes to a maximum of 3 days, as long as I get a notification ping. 2. If you read the first chapter, please don’t drop the novel. The next part contains some spoilers, so read carefully. The starting chapters are meant to be funny to make readers feel comfortable. Don’t worry, the MC will get back what he lost one day. 3. I am focusing more on quality than quantity. However, my English isn’t perfect yet. I would really appreciate it if you could help by reading slowly and pointing out any mistakes. 4. My goal is to create a great quality novel. I am doing my best to update one chapter every day. 5. Please don’t ask me what might happen in the future because I don’t always know myself. Sometimes, the chapters are inspired by what readers suggest, or by things I’ve seen or read recently. So, even I don’t have the full plan ahead!6. lastly, This is my first time writing a novel, mostly for fun but also to earn a little money along the way. I hope you enjoy the story, and thank you for your support!
It's one of the best storyline I have ever read, It has a Mixture Of Fantasy Cultivation Action and Adventure.The Story about The dark apostles really made my day
Unfortunately every chapter is divided by "screenplays" that could be their own chapters. Lacks individual character development as well as world building, and proper plot progress's details. Can be at the top tier of kingdom building novels with a rewrite.
Hi Everyone,I'm the author of this book, and I want to dedicate it to my family, whose unwavering support made this journey possible. A heartfelt thank you to everyone who has read this book. Your readership means the world to me.EP_Estalani
I noticed this was recently added, and I'm already enjoying it and looking forward to the next update. The more geopolitical focus is a refreshing change from what I've seen before. And, the grammar errors are minimal so far up to chapter 8. This is probably one of the best novels I've read so far (and I've read about 30 or so), because of this, I felt the need to create an account solely to write a review.
Supper and the story content is amazing .
The story is quite good…just read three chapters…
love love love twisted dark and romantic books
Excerpt from the Next Chapter:Under the moon’s gentle light, Xiao leaned closer to the trembling prince, her hand softly touching his flushed cheek. “Let me help you,” she whispered, her lips warm against his neck. Yizong’s breath hitched as her fingers traced down to his sash, the silk slipping away like water.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
your work is very impressive are you a newbie. I to have started a fantasy novel can you share tips.