I really like the story of this book so far, especially the lovey-dovey scene, tbh I've been searching a book that contains a wholesome story for so long and this book really satisfied me. Even the mc just have 1 wife at the point, the wholesomeness is really make me happy! I can't imagine how much happiness I'm gonna collect when he have much more wives in the future! Thanks a lot for you author for making this wholesome book, you don't know how happy i am reading this book ? and i hope you will make more wholesome content in the future!
The story is intriguing, and I love how it’s unfolding. I can’t fully decide yet, but I’m definitely excited to keep reading. The author does a great job of maintaining suspense and making the experience enjoyable. Can’t wait to see where it all leads!
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Wtf underrated as hell I like the flowWould recommend
Phenomenal start to what I except is going to be a wonderful addition to this site! The premise is intriguing and I can't wait for the new updates!!!
Love the premise of this and the MC is my type of guy?
MABI 是韩国小说界的绝世佳作，athex 作为一位地道的韩国人，凭借其独特的基因创作出了这部令人叹为观止的作品，连像 Jee Gab Song 这样的作家也不得不为之震撼。写作质量 - 5/5athex 的前作《ED》在写作上已经没有任何问题，而在《MABI》中，我们看到他将自己的写作技巧进一步提升，展示了他作为专业作家的非凡实力，超越了我们在这个网站上通常见到的作品。没有任何可挑剔之处。更新稳定性 - 5/5从未见过 athex 有一天没有更新，尽管一天一章看似不多，但每一章的长度堪比普通网络小说的两章，完全没有让人抱怨的空间。故事发展 - 5/5对于普通网络小说读者来说，刚开始可能节奏显得有些缓慢，但这正是这部小说的魅力所在。它保持了高质量的写作，并且即使节奏不快，依然能让你时刻保持对下一步情节的期待。人物设计 - 10/5毫无疑问，这是这部小说的最大亮点。athex 在《ED》中就已经展现了出色的人物塑造能力，而在《MABI》中，我们更能看到人物形象的进一步升华。athex 无疑是这网站上，在人物设计方面最出色的作家之一，甚至可以说是最顶尖的存在。世界背景 - 5/5像任何小说一样，世界构建可能会让某些读者觉得有些欠缺。但我个人并不认为这是个问题，因为我们足够理解每个时刻发生的事情。世界的背景在必要时逐渐揭示，而不是一开始就全部呈现。TLDR - 必看。哦，当然，我是中国人。
I personally came to Webnovel because of this novel. I started reading it on Royal Road but wondered why there hadn't been any updates after chapter 28. I Googled it and found it here.As for me, I don't mind if the main character comes off as a simp at first or if he seems confused about being reborn or anything like that. I just want to read a story like this.To me, this story is good enough to keep me engaged. Sure, there are a few errors here and there, but that's typical for a new author. So for me, I don't mind giving this story a 5-star rating.
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Not bad at all I love it .Just how I love my historical collection
fr nice book author gl !!!!! uwu i love it
Ok, finally, that's 20 chapters in, hurray! It's my book lol, so 5 stars is a given. First, to those my readers who were aggrieved about the heavy fantasy setting of Legendary Avatar, this is the redeeming book, pure football. Like the title says, it's a book about the rise of the MC from doomed aspirations to become a football God, the G.O.A.T. Just read the synopsis, and of course, constructive criticism is allowed.