JamesChronos
OMG what a pretty cover, please don't change it. Also, I'll support your work as much as I can, good luck author
Amazing story! The blend of action and emotion is perfect, and the suspense is gripping. I’m hooked and can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.
y'all should read. its a wonderful novel. I'm sure y'all going to like it.
hey does this novel have a discord channel
I have read it...It is good novel...I hope all chapter should be updated of novel. Guys you should read it...its totally amazing story outline is soo good..
It's a very interesting and unique story.I hope this novel gets more attention from the author.
you need to clarify what "open NTR" means.if it willingly netori, that would be fine.if it willingly netorare, that would be awful for me.i'll give you neutral 3 star for now
The mc intelligence in questionable, but everything else is interesting.
A solid 4. The writing is excellent. It’s too fluffy for me. The chapters are too short with little to no progress in each chapter. I think I read 10-20 chapters of them running initially. the best chapter is the first one. After that my hopes were dashed. The MC is weak, and is a Book bag for the ML literally she rides around on his back asking questions. I don’t see any value in her apocalyptic story so far. She’s cannon fodder that is JUST that. I haven’t even smelled a redeemtion for her. The monsters being unkillable (immortal) is too much. Grrrrr, creek, crash, chase blah blah blah. Shooting bullets for what reason it can’t die. And the MC is a weak link even getting bit by a rabbit. The story gets your hopes up to lead you no where. With lots of heart pumping and subtle flirting between the leads. For what?? He picked up a chick and has literally had to carry her the whole time. It’s not attractive whatsoever and the MC isn’t someone I admire. That’s what makes a good fantasy novel. Admiring the MC and being satisfied with their actions. Everything this chick has done so far have been down right silly and without the authors excellent penmanship I wouldn’t have made it past the first 20 chapters. Dear author I’d love to see your take on a generic trope. Your banter and world building is top tier. A strong but delicate female who’s quick on her feet beautiful resourceful and admirable. The male lead should actually need her or benefit from her being around other than for food. And some enemy that can be killed lol Rant over!
very 'NICE' story, the MC is being pampered by this loving slime girl, there's some thing going on with a strange cult thing, this seem very interesting ? and I'm giving this review to motivate the author, this is a great novel man.?
i like cows <3i'm ru and i'm writing this with all my heart, pls support me because i have big plans for this story and i've tried to write it so many times. THIS IS THE TIME (I BROKE MY KNEE)
Love the start and development so far. This really is a hidden gem
