First time I’ve been attracted and attarched to a novel as such. Everything is on point for me but the only problem is the words and vocabulary.Please come down to my level
Wow that's very interesting keep up the good work
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i really like the novel's concept ...the story is very entertaining well a little bit frustrating when the mc is been mocked or bullied but I also like the mc character calm and calculative and am really excited about the future plot will he merge with a talented character who had never appeared in the novel or a hidden villain .......am very curious is about the AUTHOR did he give Alden the cheat system or is the system an anomaly that author didn't notice or the author sent Alden to suffer without any system or a good ability ...............or was Sammy even the main character we all know every main character has to be different than all other characters he has to special in someway or another what if he was the main villain after he was consumed by the heart Demon I don't know but am really really really excited for the future chapters
A one of a kind creation filled with intriguing elements and non mainstream themes.Though it falls on the darker side of a webnovel, it still has some parts that shine in aspects unrelated to dark novels.The mc is intelligent and quick-witted.Although quiet, he has a good grasps of his thoughts and doesn't waste his and our time.Despite the story just beginning, the supporting characters seem to be immersed in a world of their own.They don't overly stand out, but are not lost in the crowd either. Instead, it seems as though they're just continuing their lives instead of starting from beginning with vague backstories.The story itself has more to look forward to, than Lucy escaping his captors and becoming strong enough to get revenge on his father. (Ps. I read the spoilers.)The world building is very unique and well-defined.And the writing style of the author is not bad and the author has a special way of inserting important information in the most subtle of ways. (Yeah, I saw what you did back there in chapter 1)Uhh… what else…Updates and stability? I can't really say much on that since I met a bunch of chapters waiting for me to read through.Consistency!The author has a way with cliffhangers, and the transition from chapter to chapter.Trust me, if I didn't meet those chapters, I might've been frustrated to no end.That phrase; leaves you wanting more… it definitely exists in here if the author manages to get you immersed, which he definitely will.There are a few grammatical errors, but hey, no one's perfect and the story's good enough for me to not even spot them or simply ignore them.And finally, why are you still reading this instead of clicking read now.Haven't I convinced you enough!?
The story is wayyyyyyyyy toooooo fastttttt golden core in 7-8 chapter. maybe I guess i like slow cultivation novels. but I like the system reminds me of a similar novel I read long ago.
This is a great novel, I loved that the mc regretted his doings even after he got a new life as a novel extra, You don't see that everyday that's for sure. Manhwa's tend to forget about the MC's past life but not this masterpiece. WELL DONE AUTHOR..
The writing quality of the story is very traditional which I like. The pacing is also well-written. Every chapter reveals something that helps develop the MC's power. Keep it up, author!
yo author are you going through and editing all the chapters right now or are you uploading more. i just got to the end of the edited chapters and as i continued to the non edited ones im reeealy confused. just asking to confirm if you are currently editing old chapters instead of adding new ones.love the novel so far tho keep up the great work regardless
this way too good, coffee and zombie, barista and buildinh
Is it weird that I'm in love with my own book? Dang, I enjoy reading it over and over again even more than I enjoyed writing it. Coming from the author, I can tell you, this is not just your average office romance...it's way more ;-)
Interesting start to story. Yet to come across anything similar. Looking forward to read how the story develops.