I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style.While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book."Isaac likes to sing.he enjoys it.Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't.Alice likes her elder brother."Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences
Author here, let me tell u dat da the story basically is going to be deep.. this is how it goes..the guy said to the girl: u wan som fack?the girl says: yesand thus dey have sum fak. the end.. v . v. n.
It's quite an interesting fantasy book. I think you've got lots of ideas to keep the story flowing. The character names are also unique. I can't wait to read more chapters~
truly a hopeless novel and trash and retard MC and nonsense plot story.I don't understand why the authors of this genre of the novel insist on making the MC dump and dumper with each passing chapter and plots will become more and more nonsenseLike always we have a super Idiot, retard, dump with no common sense, and this situation will become ort and worst as the story goes on. Jut in the 20th chapters and it's like a crazy person.Webnovel must pay more attention to the novels it chose.
Author runs out of ideas and vision by chapter 70 lol. All of his sect mates suddenly become just as overpowered like the MC somehow with magical encounters and hidden backgrounds to instantly power them up. Haven't read very far but the sect leader is apparently a hidden super expert? What? Nothing is making sense anymore. Also there's no direction in this novel. What's the MC's purpose? What will he do? Are there any adventures? Answer is nothing.Author had an interesting premise but no long term plan and it just devolves into bullshıt.
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super good story the character development was amazing i quite like the characteristics of the main protaginist no spoilers to show heee heee heee
I rate this novel five since it is able to satisfy my imagination and so far I'm still enjoying to read it up to the latest chapter. (READ AND SEE IF YOU LIKE IT DON'T LET OTHER PEOPLE INFLUENCE YOUR DECISION BECAUSE LOT'S OF PEOPLE JUST LOVED TO CRITICIZE THE WORK OF OTHER PEOPLE.) # I'm not good in English
I don’t like the way they put the game so unfair to solo players and poor ones. Who would play this game? Only rich players?Most gamers are not rich and just normal family and in an average salary. Also, it’s only half an hour in the game and they are already in much advantage... then only beta testers are going to reign this world. New players can’t keep up and chase to early birds...This game is so bad, unfair, and boring...Only fighting and doing quest or PvP. No lifestyle nor something nothing to do with fights and quest.People only liked the plot twist of the quest.For the background, it’s bad.Too much explanation and copy and paste author from his past chapters. (Repetitive sentences)I don’t know if this edited or whatever, if it is then it’s bad.
Do not read some dumb novel written by a dumb ero fanatic all em novels of the 70's are way better...plus he sure jokes with he eyes a lot .. the name z sure cliche buh the novel z dumb...it's just hypnotize and bang his sis, his boss, mum??? the story has no damn depth do u hear me... . .....Author or translator...you darn messed up
Sad to see that the HDE is ended prematurely due to personal matter. Still, I like this author's writing style. It is suitable to my taste, perhaps due to me being a Malaysian too. Story wise, good start. Author made his MC start with being crippled as he went through series of confident set back to cultivate again. I hope the plot would get mature faster seeing that MC is in fact an expert and the mentor of a supreme emperor.I'm also looking forward for MC love interest, because you did not went further down the emotional road in your stories before. The fact there's some little thoughts related to xiao-ke and his grandfather made me notice authors effort in putting more effort in dialog and relationship into his story.cultivation wise, it wasn't very deeply introduce yet. I am still wondering how the story will goes from the flesh - bone - spiritual root layer. But at the same time, author hinted that there's the rumors of Pericelestial after Precelestial, so I guess that's gonna be where Jindan stage come.Overall, good start, I would say. As long author willing to keep the story goes and interesting, I'll follow without regret. it was a great experience so far since The Jade Realm, Uncle Store in Apoc, and Heavenly Dungeon Exploration.