As much as I tried to like this story, I couldn't make it past the first 17 chapters.The translation is so badly done that there are certain characters that are obviously female but have male names and are only refered to as male. Then the MC's stats are all over the place. One chapter a stat is 20 and then five chapters late it is 10. Overall the translation is so bad that you can't read the story.
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Interesting story, good write up and nice character design. kudos to the author of this book, more inks to your pen✍️✍️✍️ wanting for the next episode, I definitely want to know the name of the virus
This is way better than I taught it would be, 7.8 out of 10 is what I would give it.
very early to say but the enjoyed the start. keep up the great work. ?????????????????????????????????????????
oh my god I love this so so much pls continue this it is so good to see an op character such as those so pls upload this again b b
Amazing.I have nothing else to comment but this.the grammer the story and everything else is out of this world.I really love everything about this
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Dis is sogood...i loved it to the core if my heart.i want to show the bonding of vrishketu with all the pandavas especially arjuna..I also want to see vrishketu warrior skills
Grandmist sageYou better chillTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
I may have only read the trial chapter but I am enjoying the book so far and would like to read more of the book to see what happens next. Thanks for listening