Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy.
Ungrateful mc
The system isn't really explained properly.
Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere...
the personality of mc changes quite a lot.
Man I like the story so far but man is the grammar horrible. Sometimes I don’t even know if Mc is a female, narrator or a kid named Chris. Idk if it’ the translations or the author keeps Messing up with points of views
The plotline of the story is quite interesting and the fact that she's taking revenge from her father is even more intriguing tbh. Can't wait to find out how she manages to do it and if she succeeds or not ^.^ 100% recommended!
I love everything apart from the updates it's not stable and am invested in the story it's a bit sad bit great story ... authors please work harder
Story is already captivating after reading just the first chapter, really interesting, captivating and intriguing.Read this book and you'll thank me later.
Ok, I finished reading this in raws and the story gets really bad in the second half. It has around 350 chapters and the first 150 are pretty good and seem to be gearing up to become a 1000 chapter novel, but after 200 you start to notice problems. There's a lot of nationalism involved and it was hard to sit through even though I'm used to it at this point. Then after 250, the pacing starts getting really bad and entire plot points set up before are discarded or brushed through casually. Important characters forgotten, author rushes to end the story in one of the worst endings I've seen and I say this having read all kinds of bad endings over the years.I can see why this is pretty popular right now because the first half is decent, but the latter half was terrible.
I am once again back reading this wonderful novel, i have let this marinate like a manhwa novel. i hate waiting for new chapters.
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Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it.
I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates).
However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others?
For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool?
Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!
i found this really fun at first. mc seemed fun even though he wasnt smart he was written charismatic. he was an underground fighter but he still had certain principles.
unfortunately author writes in the chinese writing style where rape is excused. now if this was a minor incident i would have looked over it but in this particular scene mc rapes a chick right after it.
made me so disappointed and disgusted.
Interesting premise, great suspense and some really emotional moments.Rant Valo, the MC, feels truly alive and his decisions are logical or at least understandable.Good story, would recommend.
A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!