upto free chapters:story pace is really good .mc is gready, has a bottom line and only care for others if he has the power to do so.the filler words or just time wasting conversation is really less in novel.
I'm here for a FP, ? but I'll consider your book later.
Not bad and I think I like the way its progressing
i have say that this some thing called wuxia type novel. u will see a different start in this novel. lets see this might become another novel collection of cultivation novels.
i wish I could give it 5 stars but it's simply not enough chapters. shame on you, author ?.I have not done the math to see if every calculation matches with the point totals the author mentioned but do any of us really care? the MC has been put in a sticky situation and uses his brains more than his sword to solve problems. it's a harem but even within 50 chapters the author tries to breathe life into them. they aren't there yet but they are close to not feeling 2 dimensional which is hard to do in harem novels. if you're on the fence I would read what you can. I read up to 56 I think while it was free and it's good so far. one of the better novels grammatically on this site.
Perdón si escribo en español pero me da flojera escribir en inglés, me gusta esta serie es entretenida y bien argumentada por esta serie volví a ver bleach, solo opino que la tienda venda el byakugan Hyuga y el otsusuki por separado como una actualización o que venda linajes.
this is the first book I have read where the FL didn't go to the bar after being betrayed and get raped after getting drunk
Good going with the main character. A guy with a goal always make for a good story and growth.This is definitely a good system based novel.Keep up the great work.
Orb Watcher is a magic tool that copied a magic box, you know that box, there a show human in it.
but at the time na nagka apo siya which is Sophie
"I see you are awake," she heard a voice. She saw that it was a young brown haired man who was sitting in a chair close to her. He was wearing some strange and futuristic looking body armor.
Dr. Helen Cho walked into the room, her heels clicking against the tiled floor as she read off of her clipboard, "The cellular cohesion will take a few more hours, but we can initiate the consciousness stream."